This was made by someone else in my group in Media Arts. It had a lot of corrections on it, so this isn’t exactly the same as the real thing. We eventually made this into a movie, which you can see here:
INT. OFFICE – DAY
EDDIE MOON, is sitting in front of a desk, with white “asylum-clothes” on. His head is shaved and has a sickly expression on his face. Doctor walks in the office. The Doctor is wearing a white lab coat with a notebook, pen, and a tape recording.
Doctor
(cautiously)
Hello Mr. Moon…how are you today?
Eddie
(coldly)
Fine.
Doctor
Well, have you been taking the medication prescribed for your…um…hallucinations?
Eddie
(shouting)
I don’t have hallucinations and I never did! I am not crazy! I know what I saw wasn’t a hallucination! You don’t even know what happened that day!
Doctor
(curiously)
What exactly happened to you that day? What was it that you saw?
The Doctor carefully turns on his tape recorder to record Eddie’s story.
Eddie
(calmly)
Well, it all started off when I got into some trouble with a gangster in L.A….
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EXT. PARK – DAY
Ordinary park with a couple trees in the background.
Eddie is walking across the park. TYRONE comes chasing after him. Tyrone is wearing a black wife-beater and a black cap backwards and has a menacing look on his face.
Tyrone
(angrily)
Hey fool, you in a gang?! Where you from?!
Eddie
Nowhere man..chill out.
Eddie pushes Tyrone with one arm and tries to walk away. Tyrone blocks his path.
Tyrone
You don’t know what you just did, do you?
Before Eddie can answer, Tyrone swings at Eddie. Eddie ducks and punches Tyrone in the stomach and finishes him off with a right cross. Tyrone falls onto the ground. Eddie kicks Tyrone while he is on the ground and starts to walk away. Tyrone is bleeding from his nose.
Tyrone
(shouting)
Hey! You just committed suicide, you know that?! You better watch your back, fool, ’cause imma get you!
CUT BACK TO:
INT. WHITE OFFICE – DAY
Eddie
That was probably the worst mistake I ever made
Doctor
What are you talking about?
Eddie
well…the gangster came after me the next day and when he said I committed suicide at the park the other day…he was right.
CUT TO:
EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET – DAY
Nice middle-class suburban neighborhood in California.
Eddie is walking down a street. He passes a parked car with two people in it. He doesn’t notice the people.
INT. CAR
The car is somewhat clean with TOMRONE in the driver’s seat and Tyrone loading a gun. Tomrone is a muscular guy with a light beard. He is driving the car. Tyrone is wearing the same outfit from the incident at the park and is holding a gun.
Tomrone
You sure that’s the guy?
Tyrone
Shut up! I know it’s him!
Tyrone finishes up loading his gun and cocks it.
Tyrone
All right, let’s go.
The car starts to slowly follow Eddie. Eddie doesn’t notice the car. The car pulls up right next to him.
Tyrone
(shouting)
HEY! Remember me?! I told you you were committing suicide! Die!
Eddie suprisingly looks toward the car. Before he can do anything, Tyronefires his gun at Eddie. Eddie screams and falls to the ground. The car Tyrone is in races down the street. Eddie is lying on the ground motionles. There is a puddle of blood coming from beneath him.
CUT TO:
INT. OFFICE – DAY
Eddie
That is all I remember. Hearing those gunshots and me falling. I died right after, you know.
Doctor
(unbelievingly)
OK…so if you died that day, then how are you here right now?
Eddie
(annoyed)
I DID die. But I came back to life. How many times do I have to tell you people that?!
EXT. SAME RESIDENTIAL STREET – DAY
Eddie is motionless and lying on the ground with a puddle of blood oozing out of him. Suddenly, Eddie’s transparent spirit rises from his body. He looks around, feeling his body, checking for wounds. Then looks down at his human body.
Eddie
(bewildered)
What? What the hell is going on?! Why am I lying there?
People start gathering around Eddie’s dead body. One leans over to check Eddie’s pulse. After a short time, he sadly shakes his head. Eddie starts to wave his arms to the people gathered around his body.
Eddie
(scared)
Can you guys see me? Come on! Say something! Oh my God…I can’t believe this is happening…
CUT TO:
INT. OFFICE – DAY
Eddie is sitting quietly as if he is thinking about something. The Doctor waits patiently.
Eddie
You understand what has happened so far don’t you?
Doctor
I’m not that sure. But please, go on.
Eddie is quiet again. He is thinking to himself.
Eddie
(solemnly)
That is when I realized what had happened. My spirit had left my body. That is why my body was lying on the ground…dead. When I finally accpted this fact I couldn’t believe that I had made nothing of my life. I had dreams. I prayed that if I could have one more chance…just one more chance to live again…I would do something with life. That is when another miraculous thing happened.
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EXT. SAME RESIDENTIAL STREET – DAY
Eddie’s transparent spirit is sitting on the sidewalk with his eyes closed as if he is praying. A loud booming VOICE is heard from the sky. The voice is deep and filled with wisdom.
Voice
IT is not your time yet. Live again and fulfill your destiny.
Eddie’s spirit is looking around extremely puzzled by the voice. Then all of a sudden Eddie’s spirit disappears. Bird’s eye view of Eddie’s body. His eyes flicker a bit. Then it slowly begins to open. It opens all the way. He starts blinking fast breathing heavily. He is alive but barely.
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INT. OFFICE – DAY
Eddie
(reminiscing)
It was crazy. Right then, a miracle happened…
Doctor
(impatiently)
What? What happened after that?
Eddie
(enthusiastically)
God had sent my spirit back into my body to fulfill my destiny on earth!
Doctor
(sarcastically)
So…what you’re trying to say is that your spirit left your body…and God sent your spirit back into your body so you could fulfill your destiny?
Eddie
(beginning to get angry)
You don’t believe me, do you? You think I’m crazy like everyone else is, don’t you!? Isn’t that why I’m locked up in here? In this asylum?
Doctor
(calmly)
Thank you for your time, Mr. Moon. I’ll see you same time next week, take your medicine daily.
Eddie glares at the Doctor with hateful eyes. Then Eddie is escorted out. After Eddie leaves, the Doctor picks up the still running tape recorder and speaks into it.
Doctor
(slowly with no feelings)
Patient 257 is suffering from severe hallucinations and hears voices…may be suffering from long-term schizophrenia and manic depression…due to his conditions…he cannot be helped.
The Doctor clicks the recorder…pauses as if to think…shakes whatever he’s thinking about off…and turns off the light…
(end)
I thought this was a pretty bad script actually…it had potential, but it came out realllllly bad….